Added: Feb 8, 2012
From: haileybercher1212
Duration: 0:21
Chapter 2! thanks to all who read the last one. pleeeease tell your friends to read this and to keep reading! the more views and subscribers i get the more i will upload i promise! comment, rate, inbox and subscribe! --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I woke up the next morning, after the first night in my new room. I wasnt really unpacked, i just pretty much had a bed and my furniture, and a lot of boxes. I decided to unpack a few things once i woke up. After about 3o minutes i walked downstairs. My mom was doing her normal routine, watching tv with a mug of coffee on the couch. We didnt have much food so i told her i woudl go to the coffee shop and buy some bagels tea. i quickly got dressed. it was a warm and sunny day so i put on my white short shorts, and a neon pink tanktop. I had just walked into the coffee shop, and got in line. I looked at the hair of the person infront of me... i knew those curls. harry! it was him infront of me. but that would be totaly creepy if i said anything just yet. after he ordered, he turned around. "brenna! hello!" he said excitedly "oh hey harry! i didnt see you there" i lied. "how are you?" he asked "im pretty good, you?" i said, "im great." he said, " do you want to sit and have tea?" "oh i'd love to but," i said. wait what was i thinking, a cute boy wanted to talk! "actually, i'd love to." i changed my answer . i quickly texted my mom saying i'd be a bit. she said it was fine, "great, ill go save us a table." he said i ordered my tea, and walked over. Harry was sitting by the window looking out. he looked so adorable when he was thinking. i walked over and gently sat down. "hi, im back" i said "wonderful" harry laughed. we talked for a bit. about everything. from school, to where i used to live, to family. When we got to talking about family and family members, it got awkward for me. There was one thing i left out and luckily harry didnt asked about it. my dad. i just couldnt bring that on him right now. to deep. after about 35 minutes i had to go "harry im sos orry, ive had a wicked good time talking to you, but i have to get back home." i said. "oh darn. i've had a great time too. maybe we could see eachother soon?" he asked "yeah sure deffinit-" i said before harry interupted. "tonight!! lets get together tonight" he jumped in "would that work for you?" he asked. "haha yeah i'm sure that would work" i said. "okay, here's my number. i will text you later what we will do tonight and where and when." he said. "alright great! see you later!" i said. i stood up. he gave me a quick hug and kiss on the cheek. HARRY'S P.O.V- wow she was awesome. she was great to talk to. cute, sweet, sarcastic with a little bit of mysteriousness. after i hugged her, i watched her walk out. and wow. her tan thin body was amazing, and so attractive. and her bum. what a nice bum. that girl had something about her that made me go crazy. and i just couldnt figure out what.... ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- next chapter soon if i get views! comment rate inbox and subscribe!! (:
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haileybercher1212 Says:
Feb 9, 2012 - awh thank you!! it really means a lot(: im hooked to your story too!! and oh my, yes that would be great! thank you so much! i would love that!(:
mebeastorywriter Says:
Feb 9, 2012 - just put up my next chapter along with your shout-out!!! :D
kyla4ful Says:
Feb 9, 2012 - this is really good! definitely going under my favourites! (;
LillySTYLES16 Says:
Feb 9, 2012 - Its really good for your second one! keep writing, sounds like a good story :)
bieberluvs100 Says:
Feb 9, 2012 - looks like shes got that " One Thing" ahaha get it?
haileybercher1212 Says:
Feb 9, 2012 - @kyla4ful Thank you so much!
haileybercher1212 Says:
Feb 9, 2012 - @LillySTYLES16 Thank you, it really nice to hear that(:
haileybercher1212 Says:
Feb 9, 2012 - @bieberluvs100 hahahah yes exactly!
SaraEmilyy14 Says:
Feb 9, 2012 - Its really great!!! I'm gonna subscribe to you when I have time to get on my computer it won't let me do it on my phone. I love if you checked out my story :)
haileybercher1212 Says:
Feb 9, 2012 - @saraemilyy14 awe thanks so much! means a lot :) yes i will go check yours out!
haileybercher1212 Says:
Feb 12, 2012 - hahahah thank you! and yes harry always says he likes a nice bum in his interviews(: chapter 3 is up!
HarryLoverForever Says:
Feb 13, 2012 - this is really good! i suscribed just a few minutes ago! if you could please check out my stories too, it would be great! :)
JuggleForMeStyles Says:
Feb 15, 2012 - Hahaha her bum! I laughed so hard at that part!
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mebeastorywriter Says:
Feb 8, 2012 - This is soooooo good so far!!!!! Eeeeep I want to read more!!! Please post soon and if you need help getting more views and subscribers and whatnot I could give you a shout out in one of my story chapters? If that's alright with you? Anywhooooo MORE!